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WESTERN SKIES
She eats her berries.
Kit – He moved to Florida after retirement. Colorado is too cold for him these days. Now I take care of the ranch. Bette spends a lot of time here but she has her life in San Francisco.
Tina – San Francisco?! Quite a different pace …
Kit – Yes, she has the best of both worlds! But of course, Charlie is her baby! So, she is here quite regularly.
Tina – Charlie is a handsome stallion … with an interesting name.
Kit – Oh … that was a sad story. Charlie was the nickname of Bette’s childhood friend, Charlotte. She died of an accident in the mountains.
Tina – So sad … I’m very sorry.
Kit – Yeah … it was a difficult time for all of us, but especially for Bette … devastating, really! Six months later, one of our mares gave birth … a difficult birth … and Bette helped save the foal. She has been inseparable with Charlie ever since. He helped her as much as she helped him!
The blonde nods.
Tina –Yes. How long ago was it?
Kit – Well, Charlie is ten, so …
Tina – I see …
The ranch owner pours more lemonade on Tina’s glass.
Kit – You need to drink some more, Tina! The mountains are dry! You, beach folks, can get lots of headaches here!
The blonde nods with a soft smile.
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Ranch house kitchen, afternoon: Kit is walking Tina through the house. They step into the large kitchen with an adjoining breakfast area. Maria is preparing lunch, cutting vegetables at the kitchen island.
Kit – This is my favorite part of the house! Maria and I spend a lot of time here!
Tina – It’s beautiful! And most certainly inviting!
She turns to Maria.
Tina – Thank you for the brunch, Maria! It was delicious!
Maria – You’re welcome, Miss Kennard!
Tina – Tina, please!
Maria smiles and nods. The blonde takes pictures of the room.
Kit – Do you like cooking, Tina?
Tina – I do! Although … work gets in the way.
Kit – I know! I remember my days on the road: too many sandwiches and pizza!
The blonde chuckles.
Tina – And coffee too!
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Bibi28 says
I promise to read every chapter as soon as possible, as long you keep posting them regurlarly ????
I love it, they are two proud woman as i see, but i already see the attraction.
Kit is a very nice woman and certainly not afraid to head butt with Bette.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
proteonomics says
dbff:
Great chapter, thanks for the rapid update. I like your story very much.
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Zhenya says
Hi, thanks for the update!
I promise read and comment regularly too)
I like how you developing your story, so waiting for the next.
Sorry, but can’t help about editing old posts – maybe you need to write messege to Jacky (https://lesfan.com/members/jacky/)
leonora says
I love the storyline and your writing style is great! I can’t wait for the next chapters!
Alexx says
Thank you for the creat chapter!
Bette in wet t-shirt – nice)
Waiting for the next chapters.
SassyGran says
I promise you that if you keep posting regularly I will read them as soon as I am able.
Love the 3 Characters you have given us here and look forward to your story unfolding.
Thanks for posting please post again soon.
SG
BlueFlame7 says
Great descriptive writing. Im hooked! PPS
MissOne says
Great chapter!
Good to see that Tina and Bette start talking, but don’t know how i feel about T saw Bette’s picture without her permission
Interesting plot, waiting for the next update!
Therese_Belivet says
Dear dbff
I’m currently discovering this other story, being “orphan” from your After The Kiss *wink* and I’m already hooked !
You have a truly cinematic eye – and I’m a huge cinema passionate. I can see Kit’s ranch and every details as if I was admiring them through Tina’s eyes and, well, to imagine Bette as a cowgirl is very sexy, I must say !
Since I adore western movies, I cannot help but remembering the great Missy, my favorite classic actress : pretty fiery, even arrogant but mesmerizing too – our poor Tina has no chance to resist !
Thank you so very much for this new delightful journey, my dear writer :-)
A.
dbff says
I’m so glad you found this story, A.! It’s for Tibetters like you!
ps: I had to check, but I believe you were referring to Barbara Stanwyck! :D
Therese_Belivet says
Yes indeed !
Well, what can I say ? “Cowgirl” immediately makes me think about Stanwyck in one of her westerns (like The Furies, The Moonlighter or Forty Guns) – even if this marvelously versatile actress was great in every other movie genres possible *wink*
And, well, her voice is the sexiest I have ever heared… Not a beauty but what a charm – more dangerous, the charm !
So now that you already know two of my absolute favorite ladies, Jennifer Beals and “Missy”, I five your the last two : my first teenage crush, Vivien Leigh, and my biggest screen crush ever, Kate Winslet :-)
And you, if I can ask ? *big wink*
A,