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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Alice: [looking around notices Dana was not there]
Tina: Has anyone spoke to Dana?
Shane: Yeah, I spoke to her not to long ago she’s on the way.
Tina: Great!
Alice: [in an uncomfortable tone] Uh, can I get a drink?
Bette: Yeah, there’s water, tea, lemonade, and soda in the cooler.
Alice: No, I was thinking more on the line of a drink…..drink.
Bette: [remembering Helena and Tina were sipping on Vodka] There’s some Vodka in the kitchen come on I’ll show you.
Alice: Thanks. [she says following behind her]
Jenny: [now standing in front of Shane with her arms extended] Come, friend give me a hug.
Shane: No.
Jenny: And why not?
Shane: Because I believe in annoyed at first sight. [she says before walking off to join Tina and Kit]
Tina: So, you’re not speaking to Jenny either?
Shane: Hell no! A few days ago I’m guessing it was after she was realized from jail——-.
Kit: [correcting her] You mean after I bailed her out of jail?
Shane: Right……so she walks into my salon with a live peacock talking about she wants her hair dyed the same color as its feathers. Twinzies……she says [mimicking her voice]! Before, I could kick her and her oversized pigeon out its starts attacking two of my customers and fatally injuring another. To make matters worse someone recorded it and now not only am I being sued but you might catch me on the next episode of when Animals Attack!
Kit & Tina: [burst out laughing]
Shane: Don’t laugh it’s not funny! I could lose my shop because of Jenny!
Kit: I’m sorry [she manages to say in between laughs]
Tina: Me too its just—–[when she turned to face Kit they both busted out laughing again]
Shane: Awwwww, great just great I’m glad you two find humor in all this!
Tina: [still laughing] No, really I’m sorry it’s just I mean where in the hell did Jenny get a peacock from anyway?
Kit: [wiping the tears from her eyes] Who knows she probably gave birth to it then sat on it until it hatched.
Tina: Sounds like you can use a drink too.
Shane: You have no idea!
In the kitchen…..
Alice: [taking a sip] It’s not strong enough.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.