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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Jenny: Nope. I can’t. And I won’t. I’m busy. [still swaying her hips back and forth]
Shane: Never mind I got it. [she says walking over unlatching the lock to let Dana in]
Dana: [giving her a hug] Hey!
Shane: Hey, you look refreshed.
Dana: Yeah, well I got in a really great practice before I came.
Kit: Hey Dane! [hugging her next]
Dana: You smell like charcoal so that means you’ve been on the grill I’m definitely ready to eat!
Helena: Oh, yeah Kit put her foot in those skewers just wait until you taste them.
Shane: Well, you don’t have to wait long Tina went to get the rest of the food we should be stuffing our faces in no time.
Dana: I bought drinks. [she says holding up a bag]
Kit: The cooler is right over there.
Dana: Oh, no these aren’t those type of drinks [she says opening the bag looking into it] I have Rum, Bourbon, Wine, and of course Vodka.
Jenny: [out of nowhere she snatches the bag out of her hand and walks off with it]
Dana: [startled] She swooped in like the Matrix!
Shane: Jenny!
Kit: Can you at least give up one bottle!?
Jenny: [cuddling in a corner turns her back towards them not saying a word]
Kit: I swear she gets on my last nerve!
Tina: [walking into the kitchen finds Bette and Alice hugging] Oh, sorry I did not mean to interrupt. [seeing Alice face she begins to worry] Hey, are you okay?
Alice: [sniffling wiping the few tears from her cheek] Yeah, I’m fine I just had a moment.
Tina: Are you sure?
Alice: [standing up] Yeah, uh I’m fine I’m going to go outside to get some fresh air [before she exits the kitchen she looks back at Bette] Thanks.
Bette: Anytime.
Tina: [watching Alice leave she then turns her attention to Bette] Is she really okay?
Bette: [in a somber tone] No.
Tina: [walking towards her] Bette whats going on?
Bette: [grateful she was in arms reach quickly wraps her arms around her waist pulling her into her]
Tina: [is suddenly taken off guard before she was able to protest her bold gesture Bette pressed her lips against hers.]
Ignoring her resistance Bette captures her top lip sucking it into her mouth releasing it then doing the same to her bottom lip. Tina restlessly moved against her a few seconds more moments later she finally relaxed giving in to her advances. Despite, how mad she was she couldn’t deny she was like putty in her arms. Allowing, her full control Tina wallowed in her wife’s embrace not wanting her to assume she had completely forgiven her she pulled back hoping to convey her point and catch her breath.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.