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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Bette: What do you mean?
Tina: [in a hurtful tone] I’ve called and text Tasha non-stop and she hasn’t reached out to me yet. I know it’s selfish but all I can think about is her being with Savannah and the shit hurts Bette it really hurts getting a dose of my own medicine. [she says fighting back tears]
Bette: What do you want?
Alice: [taking another sip of her drink]
Bette: No matter what’s going on reality is she’s still in a relationship and so are you.
Alice: Yeah, I know.
Bette: I guess the question you should be asking yourself is not what you want but who do you want?
Alice: [shaking her head]
Bette: If Tasha and Dana stood before you right now and asked you to choose who would it be?
Alice: [finally allowing a tear to fall] Truthfully, I don’t know.
Bette: [wrapped her arms around her hugging her trying to console her]
On the patio…..
Shane, Kit, Tina, and Helena starred at Jenny in disgust as she “sucking-ly” attempted to hula hoop. Believing she was moving her hips elegantly as she swayed back and forth she was sadly mistaken in reality her movements were reminiscent of a stranded beach whale trying to make its way back to sea. With her head leaned back, arms raised to the sky, and a smile wider than the butt crack on a plumbers ass she was in a world of her own.
Kit: [staring at her shaking her head] I thought gremlins couldn’t eat chicken after midnight?
Tina: Leave it to Jenny to figure out a way.
Shane: How did she get here anyway I didn’t see her car?
Helena: Who knows probably flew in on her broomstick! [her comment caused everyone to laugh]
Tina: I’ll be back I need to bring out the food from the kitchen so we can eat.
Jenny: [overhearing her] Do you need any help?
Tina: Nope, I got it.
Jenny: Great, because I didn’t want to help anyway but thought it would be rude if I didn’t ask.
Helena: [sighs in disgust]
Kit: Oh, look there’s a stranger lurking outside the fence?
Shane: It’s about time!
Helena: You’re the closes to the gate can you open it?
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.