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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Bette: Don’t say that no one deserves to be cheated on trust me I know that better than anyone.
Alice: I haven’t even told her Dana is back in town.
Bette: Why?
Alice: Because deep down I know she won’t be okay with it.
Bette: And rather than give her the option of telling you she doesn’t approve in your mind it makes things easier if she just didn’t know.
Alice: I really sound like a piece of shit don’t I?
Bette: No you don’t.
Alice: [stares at her]
Bette: Well, okay I mean technically you sound more like chicken, dog, or fly shit and let me tell you theres nothing worse than fly shit.
Alice: [now looks at her awkwardly]
Bette: What there’s different levels to shit?!
Alice: [sighing] Yes, I am……I haven’t physically had sex with Dana but mentally I allowed myself to get involved. All these years left wondering what could have been and when I saw her it’s like I wanted to pick up where we left off ignoring the fact that things had changed. I’ve been in a committed relationship with Tasha for almost ten years and here I am running around like some love sick school girl pretending to be single. I pulled away from her Bette [she says in a hurtful tone] and now she’s done the same. She doesn’t call or text me like she did when she first got to Virginia. Even though she’s never said anything I could hear it in her voice every time we talked she knew something was wrong. To hear some woman give the attention and time I’ve neglected to give her I deserve everything that’s coming to me……I deserve to lose her.
Bette: [remained silent giving her a listening ear]
Alice: I found out about the voicemail while on a movie date with Dana.
Bette: [in a surprised tone] A movie date? Alice!
Alice: I know……I know I’m such a fucking hypocrite.
Bette: Glad you acknowledge it now continue.
Alice: After listening to the voicemail I was angry, hurt, and felt guilty since then I haven’t spoken to Dana either.
Bette: You know she’ll be here right?
Alice: Yeah, I know I just needed space to clear my head but I’ve made things worse.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.