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    All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)

    Story written on March 12, 2006 by dreiser.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59925
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    S3 SPOILERS. Alice and Dana begin their romance again, struggling because of changes not only in themselves but their lives and how they see each other.


    Then she fell in love with Dana and then she fell apart when Dana left
    her and Alice knew it wasn’t true. Because if she couldn’t keep that
    attraction and love she should have been able to forget the tennis
    player and everything they shared. Their romance ending should have
    been something easily shaken off, like droplets of water removed from a
    raincoat after the storm. Instead it rejoined the rest of her failed
    romances, settling into a cold and dark puddle that seemed to be ever
    expanding. But Alice couldn’t forget and she couldn’t let go and the
    reality of that sheer inability is what had nearly destroyed them both.


    While she wished that she had been able to discover she was quite
    capable of falling in love and staying that way under more pleasant
    circumstances, Alice couldn’t help but be grateful to know this all the
    same. Simply because it cleared space in that ever worried part of her
    mind that focused day in and day out on Dana’s condition. The last
    thing she wanted was for the athlete to ever have any hint that Alice
    no longer wanted her sexually or otherwise because of the effects this
    disease treatment was having on her body. It relaxed her a little to
    know with total certainty that she could never feel that way for Dana.


    Though she also realized that just because she knew this with total
    certainty didn’t mean that Dana would know it as well. In fact, Alice
    knew that no matter how many times she told the brunette she loved her,
    she wanted her, she found her beautiful and sexy and fucking perfect
    despite how her body looked there would be that part of the athlete who
    remained forever skeptical. And it wasn’t because Dana didn’t trust her
    or love her or anything else. That was just who Dana was and Alice knew
    that. She had known it since the day they first met and became friends.
    Because from that day forward she had been saying the same things over
    and over to the tennis player and they had yet to sink completely in.


    Things like trying to convince Dana that those aimless bits of
    information she couldn’t shake from her mind were just as valid as
    anything that anyone else knew. If you asked Alice, knowing entire
    boring process of how a bill becomes a law was impressive on its own.
    But when you added in the fact that Dana had this knowledge not from
    singing along with School House Rock but from watching C-Span with her
    father as a little girl? Well, color her a horse impressed in the most
    obnoxiously festive and gay colors.

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    1. Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!

    2. wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.

    3. Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.

    4. this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon

    5. This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx

    6. I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.

    9. Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.

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