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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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All the same, each time she tried this Dana would smile, squeeze her
hand, hug her tight, or kiss her softly and Alice knew that it didn’t
work. That the words weren’t really sinking in and that would make most
people frustrated, especially as it occurred over a seemingly endless
time period but somehow, knowing this just made the blonde love Dana
more. Maybe it was because of how she grew up with her family and the
fact that there was nothing they loved more than to talk about how
amazing they were. To brag not so subtly on whatever was going on in
their lives at the moment. The high grades they received in school, the
fat promotion they got at work, or the hot person who had hit on them.
Growing up, all Alice had ever heard from her family was dialogue on
why they were fantastic and why almost everyone else sucked. Alice
often finding herself included in the accursed category of everyone
else.
Meeting Dana and becoming friends with her had been such a relief
because unlike her family and sometimes even her friends the athlete
didn’t appear to have the tiniest hint of arrogance in her. Not really,
not when you came right down to it. Of course she had confidence in her
tennis game and her skills on the court but that was just that.
Confidence and not arrogance. Dana went into each match fully aware of
her abilities as a player but also completely aware of her opponent’s.
She never thought herself to be better than them because she had more
experience, a longer reach, or could run faster. What they were good
at, what made them excel in the sport, is what Dana concentrated on and
studied so she could overcome it in the match. Doing that was why she
had made it so long in such a highly competitive sport and it was also
why Alice loved her.
Because that part of her personality allowed Dana to see things others
didn’t. She never allowed herself to become fooled by the gossip or the
insults people would spew about certain players and how they were
washed up. The words flew past her as the athlete simply watched and
judged for herself. It was odd in a way that Dana didn’t pay attention
to what was said by others when deciding what she thought about another
person when she cared so very much what they said about her. Being
constantly vigilant and always wondering why people were looking too
long, murmuring among themselves, or any other manner of normally
harmless attention kept Dana from doing anything similar. She knew how
subtle the torture could be when you were sure people were talking
about you without grasping in the slightest what they said could
possibly ruin your life. Well, not ruin but damage it and damage it
quite a lot at that.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!