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All The White Horses: Part Three (3/5)
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The worst was what Alice expected in people, from everyone but her
friends, from those she trusted above all others. And since Dana was
her best friend, because she had known her for years, because she knew
the athlete be kind and forgiving, because she knew that while Dana
appeared naive and innocent she actually wasn’t, Alice trusted her the
most. She knew that the tennis player had the power inside of her to do
what she felt was right in terms of how other people should be treated
and once she decided on her opinion about someone almost nothing in
this world could change it.
Which is why their break up had damaged Alice so very badly because for
years she knew what Dana’s opinion was of her. She was the brunette’s
closest friend and the person she shared the best and the worst in her
life with, the one she called when she was bored and wanted to just be
around another person. Then their romance ended and suddenly that
opinion had changed. Dana stopped calling and she stopped wanting to be
around Alice and she seemed to almost stop existing in the actual
everyday occurrence of the writer’s world. In Alice’s mind, she had
gone from the most important person in Dana’s life to the very least
and after years of friendship that stung. Part of her thought maybe all
of her crazed behavior had been some warped and unstable attempt on her
part to regain that lost opinion and position in the tennis player’s
life. That she thought by making Dana to pay attention to her with
constant phone calls, on air radio rants, and frequent in person
confrontations that she could force her way back into the athlete’s
heart and mind. When all it did was to make Dana want to push her even
further away out of confusion, fear, and sadness as she had no idea how
to stop this behavior from happening and return Alice to who she once
was.
To be perfectly honest, Alice wasn’t sure what Dana could have done if
she had tried. At that point she had sunk into a dark and illogical
place where everything seemed to revolve around the tennis player. As
such, she wasn’t sure that the subject of her fixation could ever
effectively help her to get rid of it. More and more, the writer found
herself becoming so incredibly grateful for Helena because it was her
introduction into Alice’s life that caused everything to start to turn
around. Helena with her kindness and compassion and dry humored
understanding who managed to hit that perfect combination of sympathy
but clear frustration when she dragged Alice kicking and screaming from
her days on obsessing over Dana.
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Wow, I know you’re an amazing writer from prior fics but you are outdoing yourself on this one. It’s truly amazing and I loved reading it. The details are fantastic. I’m hoping for a happy ending for our girls….but I’m sure you will do the story justice. Thank you!
wow…oh wow! you definitely outdid yourself on this fic. i loved how you focused so much on their unwavering love for each other despite all the changes. their relationship will only get stronger as long as they go along w/ the changes and not stubbornly hold on to the past. i don’t know a lot about cancer treatment, but shouldn’t dana have the mastectomy first and then chemotherapy? anyway, awesome story.
Crumbs!!! That was absolutley awesome, I loved it, from begininng to end. I think your such a talented writer. Besides layla, that it blows my mind. I read it twice, it is a great, great story and I can’t wait for the cont. Please post when ye can and I’m glad ye have a life now ( ;Cheers!!! Peace.
this was great and it took me all afternoon to read it I just hope that in this story dana will beat the cancer and they will have a happy ever after please post soon
This was AMAZING! after watching what i personaly thought wasn’t a great danish season, i have decided that the show should use your story for season 3 as it is PERFECT xxx
I am not fawning but I am speechless. Dayum, girl…you can write…but you already knew that. I can guess that you don’t care much about Bette and Tina. But in general, what do you think of the season so far? Dana dies in this upcoming episode. That sucks and IMO will unbalance the karma of the group. I don’t see you post very often on the MBs but would be interested in your posting your perspective.
Thanks, thanks, thanks if at least we had had the chance of this in the show :( . Great as always.
azmama – My thoughts are rarely logical but here is their twisted train during the airing of episode 310 via a post in my lame ass LJ.http://dreiser.livejournal.com/39785.html
Heartbreaking – but so much love. Don’t we all long for such a connection. I haven’t seen Series 3, but from what has been said on the boards, I can only feel that this storyline has been dreadfully mishandled and has been treated with very little sensitivity or honesty – the only redeeming feature being the way in which ED and LeH have portrayed their roles. Your story is overwhelming in its emotional impact. I wish IC would read and learn. I think I may have said it before, but you are an amazing writer and I am humbled in your presence.
wow beautiful i just read ur story not sure if i’ve read it before amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!