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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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“For now,” scoffed Dana, pulling back from the hug and smiling at her
friend. “And exactly how long has it been since you’ve seen or spoken
to her, hmm? That information is vital in order for me to determine the
seriousness of your addiction to being in love.” Instantly, Shane’s
mouth clamped shut and her pale cheeks reddened and Dana chuckled
knowingly. Poking her friend in the ribs, she said in teasing tones,
“You just got off the phone with her, didn’t you? You were talking to
her during the entire drive over to my condo.”
“I plead the fifth,” said Shane, moving past Dana to walk further into
the condo. Stopping midway in her walk, she turned back to Dana and
wore a quietly confused expression. “Where do you want to do this,
Dane? Bedroom, kitchen, living room, or what?”
Frowning slightly as she considered this, Dana said, “I don’t know.
Cutting my hair in the kitchen doesn’t seem like a good idea because
it’s sort of unhygienic but you would know more about the space you
would need to work in.”
“I cut hair anywhere,” said Shane easily as she gave a shrug of her
shoulders. “I once had to cut this client’s hair in the tiny ass
bathroom in one of those dinky commercial airplanes because she was on
route to some D List awards show and kept insisting her hair look A
List.”
“Did you make it look A List?” asked Dana wryly.
“She got a D List award at the ceremony,” said Shane with a pleased
chuckle and a twinkle in her eyes. Tilting her head and nodding it in
the opposite direction, Shane said, “You got one of those knock off
antique dressing tables in your bedroom, right? We can use that. They
come with a mirror and usually a chair for you to sit in so it’s pretty
much perfect.”
“It’s not a knock off!” cried Dana rather indignantly, feeling very
much like the daughter of a Republican socialite in the irritation she
felt on hearing that assumption. “That was a gift from my father on my
eighth birthday and it’s the real thing. Check the drawer on the left
side and you’ll see the certificate of authenticity.”
“Right, right,” said Shane, waving off Dana’s annoyance as she chuckled
yet again and reached for her friend’s hand to lead her towards the
bedroom. “Lets go already. If I don’t get back to Carmen before
midnight I turn back into a useless dyke casanova.”
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again