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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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“Might I be completely honest with you?” asked Helena cautiously, not
wanting to repeat the journalist’s attempt to walk out on their meal or
discussion. When Alice smiled wryly and sheepishly nodded her head, the
British woman released a noiseless sigh of relief. “I think that
perhaps the reason Dana looks at you in such a manner is because of
what I and all of your other friends have been saying. She is still in
love with you and I also think that she knows you return her feelings
but are holding back because of these fears you have. Whatever is
scaring you so very greatly, the idea of Dana dying from this disease,
being unable to fight it, you must surely realize she shares with you
but at least two fold or three fold or perhaps greater than that
because she is the one who has this illness. I think whatever sadness
Dana has is because she is in love with you, she knows you are in love
with her, you both know she could die from this cancer, and if you are
not together when she possibly does die it not because of lack of love
but rather your own fears of it. And darling,” Helena said in low
tones, reaching out to still Alice’s hands which had resumed folding
and unfolding her napkin. When brown eyes lifted to lock with her
own, she said, “There is nothing sadder in this world than two
people who love each other, recognize that love, and choose to remain
apart because they are unwilling to let go of their own fears.”
There was the noise of the restaurant patrons, the staff, the cling
clang of cooking ware against metal, and so much more but despite all
that was going on Helena could swear she heard the smallest whisper
from her friend who was looking through the window and into the far off
distance. A whisper that was nothing more than the quiet admission, “I
know.”
—
With the help of her family and KCRW lawyers, Dana had worked out something
of a deal with the reporter in the blue suit Howie and Alice had such
an aversion to. She had settled on doing her charity work with the
American Cancer Society and with that decided, was finally doing a
press conference to talk about her medical condition. The man, who
turned out to be a newly hired reporter from the local NBC affiliate,
was appeased by a promise from Dana to
do an exclusive interview after the press conference ended.
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again