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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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There was little that Dana enjoyed less than talking to the press,
perhaps her current regimen of cancer treatment was more disliked, but
seeing Alice along with all of her friends and family sitting
in the front row wearing loving and encouraging expressions it was
somehow easy to get through. Questions were brief and the faces
of the reporters, many of whom Dana considered strangely to be friends
of some sort were all sympathetic and though she hadn’t expected it,
she truly felt so much love in the room. Enough that she felt
herself wanting to cry until she looked over to Alice and Howie, both
of which knew how she hated making such displays in public, who
immediately formed the silliest faces imaginable and caused her to
release a burst of laughter instead. Seconds later Alice and Howie
found several cameras flashing in their direction and her little
brother complained about being blinded.
The rest of the press conference and her following interview with the
man in the blue suit, whom Dana refused to learn much less say his
name, went well and she soon found herself whisked away in her parents
car and wishing that she was with Alice instead. Upon finding out about
the press conference an immediate impromptu mini-after party had been
arranged at The Planet for the athlete and her family and friends. Most
of which simply wanted to spend time with Dana who was doing far better
than they could have hoped in her cancer treatment. Her hair was still
slowly thinning but not enough to warrant wearing hats or even scarves
to mask it. Especially not with Shane happily volunteering her time to
do any touch ups.
Currently the group of friends were all gathered around the large
couches, Dana grinning big as Angelica sat on her lap and pulled at the
collar to her blue shirt. “She’s gotten so big,” Dana said with a good
deal of awe, looking up at Bette and Tina who beamed proudly. “How fast
is she when it comes to getting around the house?”
“Very quick,” Bette and Tina answered together, looking at each other
with wide eyes on realizing the had once again spoke the same thing at
the exact same time. It had been happening more and more lately and while
they found it amusing at first it was now becoming a bit disturbing.
“Oh no,” Alice drawled in her very best dry tones, lifting an eyebrow
speculatively. She paused to rift through her purse and pulling out her
glasses, she primly put them on and tilted her head to look at Dana and
then down at Shane who sat on the other side of the athlete and said,
“Well? Do we need to do another intervention? I can make a new
questionnaire.”
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again