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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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“No interventions!” Bette and Tina declared in a sign of joint annoyance.
“Speaking in conjunction twice,” said Dana confidentially, tilting her
head towards Alice and fighting the grin on her features. “Make a
mental note, Al.”
“Mental noting,” said Alice solemnly, nodding and pushing up her
glasses that were already slipping down her nose. The movement
attracted Angelica’s attention however and the baby was soon in
possession of them. Watching as she placed the glasses atop her head,
Alice smiled in definite approval and said, “You are styling now,
kiddo.”
“I’m surprised they don’t have her in baby Dior,” rumbled Shane,
wearing such an utterly serious expression that anyone other than her
close friends wouldn’t know she was actually teasing. Carmen tugged
lightly on her sleeve and she immediately dipped her head and grinned
at whatever the DJ then said. “Hey Al,” Shane casually called to her. “Do you want to explain the
auspicious origins of the Bette and Tina questionnaire for Carmen?
She’s curious.”
“I’m curious as well,” admitted Helena from where she sat next to Alice whom turned to her friend and blinked in confusion.
“I never told you?” asked Alice in disbelief. “I tell you everything.”
“You’ve never told me this, darling,” Helena assured with a fond
chuckle. “I’m sure that I would have remembered as I remember all of
your so very delightful and entertaining tales.”
“Oh,” said Alice, busy musing over the fact that she had apparently not
told Helena something this funny. Shrugging her shoulders she looked to
Jenny who smiled winsomely at her and said, “You don’t know either,
huh, Jenny?”
“No,” said Jenny with an easy smile. “But before you begin to explain
can you tell me what their score was?” There was a pause as Alice,
Dana, and Shane blinked at the writer who gave a light and almost
melodic laugh then said, “I just wonder what sort of score Bette and
Tina could get when they are being tested over knowledge about
themselves.” Brushing a lock of hair out of her eyes, Jenny looked at
the couple and continued, “For instance, did you get two out of three
points if you recalled what bra you wore on a certain day but not the
shoe?”
“It wasn’t that kind of test,” said Bette wryly, finding herself strangely charmed by Jenny and her out of the box way of
thinking. “Although,” she mused, looking over to Tina. “I can’t
remember most of the questions. Do you remember, T?”
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again