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All The White Horses: Part Two (2/5)
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Guilt and fear ate at her though and Dana had no idea how to begin to
do what she wanted. How to get Alice to forgive her and give them
another chance. Day after day she felt this goal floating further from
her reach until it suddenly became nothing more than a distant speck on
the horizon, far beyond her. It was at this point that Dana did what
was most familiar. She gave up. Drowning her sorrow over what was lost
and what could have been in alcohol binges, meaningless Hollywood
parties, and nameless sex with groupies.
Although the last thing that Dana wanted was to be facing death part of
her was strangely grateful for the cancer. Simply because without it
she wasn’t sure she would have ever found the courage to go to Alice
again. She felt too much guilt and self hatred for what she had done to
the blonde, for the destruction she had caused both mentally and
emotionally with the way their romance ended, and she couldn’t even
begin to know what she needed to do to fix it. Or if fixing it was
possible in the first place. And so she did nothing. Then she
discovered what the lump in her breast meant. Denial was her immediate
and well favored reaction but it didn’t last long because of the
persistent efforts of Lara and her family.
Death loomed in her thoughts and Dana knew she couldn’t leave things as
they were. She didn’t want to die, that was the very last thing she
wanted, but she also knew she couldn’t start to really fight this
disease while being without Alice. There was no way she could survive
this disease and want to truly live if she didn’t have the blonde with
her as she had for so many of the happier years before. Since the
beginning of their relationship, Alice knew the perfect thing to say or
do. She was somehow able to make Dana believe in herself when no else
could and that was what the athlete knew she would need in order to
beat this illness.
Thus she summoned up the courage to stand at Alice’s door a little past
midnight and found herself instantly rewarded for it. Things weren’t
perfect, they weren’t even close to be totally honest, but Dana didn’t
care. She had Alice with her again and it was all she had ever wished
for and she knew that as long as Alice was there she could do this.
That she could defeat this cancer and she could quiet her fears and she
could find a way to regain that love and trust they had lost. If she
had Alice with her, Dana felt she could do practically anything.
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OK – I just read the first chapter and this one – dreiser – awesome. truly. funny, sweet, sad, hopeful and bittersweet. I’d expect nothing less from you though. Very well done!
That was beautiful. Awesome writing as usual. Great way to end that chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Absolute perfection. I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again no doubt, but your writing is amazing. And I’m not just talking about the grammar, which is a big pet-peeve of mine, but I’m talking about the way you portray and characterize each character to form. You perfectly write and vocalize Alice and Dana (no doubt because of your love for the characters), but you also have a good sense for portraying all of the others. I know you love Helena, as do I, and I like how you are forming her as she’ll hopefully be portrayed in S3 (although I do like snarky Helena too!). I know where this story is heading, mainly from checking in at your journal for updates, and I’m still excited about it because of how it’s written. Anyway, long-winded I know, but I have to give accolades to your talent.
Awww i am soo inlove with this story! The way you write the characters is spot on! This chapter was just amazing! Please update soon
Thank you for this story. Yours are stories I can read over and over again and always love. Perfect.
Simply Awsome, I hope the actual season of Alice and Dana’s relationship is at least half as good as it is in your story, keep up the great work!!
That was great. Your writing is amazing. I love angst and there was enough to go around in this chapter. Their love confession was…beautiful. Great job.
I have read it more than one time and I found more and more things that I like in your story. I said before but danish has unbelieveble writers, thanks.
Hiya, I’m a silent lurker, BUT your stuff is great…the only other person here with as much talent to hold my attention is Ms.Layla_Gray, but you capture the couple like no one esle…keep it up and you have another fan here….Peace.
IC created the characters, but I am amazed by how well you “get” them. I’m sitting here at my desk feeling happy because Alice and Dana were able to admit their feelings for each other. At the same time there is a bittersweet feeling because there is a good chance that the overall ending of the story will not be happy. It’s sad that two people who were so well suited for each other and so in love had to waste so much time. But it makes for a great story for us. I will bide my time re-reading the first two parts until you post again. Thanks for another wonderful story.
I usually lurk, but I just had to comment. Beautiful. Your writing is simply beautiful. The character development, the story development, I feel more like a voyeur than a reader!! Thank you!
Amazing! I had butterflies in my stomach the entire time I read this story. You write Alice and Dana beautifully. I love Alice’s comments like, “you’re such a girl and yet so helpless about girly things” and Alice being so sweet with Dana while she was sick in the bathroom. Their thoughts and fears which you expressed, are things that Eileen and her writers failed to say in Season 2. I’ve always loved the playful and sarcastic aspect of their relationship- very well written. I can’t wait till your next update!
i had chills the entire time of reading this story. It was amazing the way you wrote about al and dane’s love and i so hope beyond hope that you write more. Please post soon
wow that was amazing! please post soon!
this is great I am just catching up so I hope that u have already post again