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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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She gestured to Shane who looked at her in complete disbelief, her eyebrows raised.
“You’re so full of shit”
“We’re doing this” Bette shot Alice a look as she turned back to the couch, squatting as she prepared to lift her side. “All of us”
Alice rolled her eyes as she bit onto the edge of her paper container and positioned herself in front of the couch, nearly dropping the cup as she mumbled her response. “Fine”
The rest of the girls jumped up to resume their task, struggling to fit the large piece of furniture through the doorway.
It was quiet as the group tried to figure out a way to bypass the difficult angle, turning and twisting the couch to no avail. It wasn’t long before the silence got to Alice, the lack of conversation fueling her need to cause mischief. She smirked before she pretended to notice something in the distance, her eyes widened with surprise.
“Hey, isn’t that Tina?”
“Huh?” Bette’s head whipped around and she pushed a little too hard on her side, smashing poor Dana against the wall once more.
“Whaa!” She squeaked, the air literally shoved from her lungs.
Bette’s head whipped back around immediately, her eyes widening in horror at the sight.
“Shit!”
Both she and Shane immediately pulled the couch back, granting Dana the ability to breathe once more. They set the couch down at Carmen’s command with Bette wearing the same guilty expression as Shane had not much earlier.
“I’m so sorry, Dane”
Shane back-slapped Alice’s arm a second later, scolding her with a look.
Alice grabbed the ice container with one hand before holding out her arms, completely at a loss. “What did I do?”
“Just switch with Dana” Shane pursed her lips as she motioned for the brunette to switch with Alice.
“I was just teasing” Alice defended as she resumed lifting the couch with the others, straining with the weight. “What’s up with you two anyway? One minute you’re making googly eyes at each other and the next you’re back to avoiding her existence”
“I’m not avoiding her existence” Bette strained as she angled the couch the best she could, growing annoyed as it wedged between the wall and door frame once more. “If you must know, she’s the one avoiding me. I haven’t seen or heard from her ever since we had that talk two days ago”
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!