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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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“Thanks for that by the way” Alice grunted as she and Carmen struggled to free the couch from its wedged position, expelling a breath upon success. “We could have used the extra hand. The moment I told her you were gonna be helping out, she suddenly forgot that she had picked up a shift to help Kit”
Bette’s eyes widened and her eyebrows rose in disbelief, “How is that my fault?”
“If you wouldn’t have given her your infamous ‘drop your panties’ look, things wouldn’t be so awkward”
Bette burst out laughing, “My what?”
“You heard me”
Bette shook her head, still laughing. “I don’t have a look like that”
“Do too” The girls agreed in unison.
“It’s why all these girls fall at your feet” Alice mock swooned and blew kisses at her laughing best friend, “Speaking of girls, how’s your new flavor of the month?”
All humor gone, Bette shot Alice a look. “Don’t call her that. It’s different with Emma”
Alice blinked in surprise as she ran the name through her memory, “Wait, is this the same girl you were with the last time I was in New York?”
Bette nodded and gestured for the girls to settle the couch back onto the floor. They clearly weren’t making any progress and there was no point to continue trying.
“Wow” Alice breathed as she straightened her position, nodding as if impressed. “Interesting. Does she know about Tina? Does Tina know about her?”
Done with the conversation, Bette motioned to the couch with a tilt of her chin. “This isn’t working. We’re going to have to remove the legs or else it’s not going to fit through the door”
Surprisingly respecting the subject change, Alice nodded. “We don’t have any tools or that though”
“My father does” Bette placed her hands on her hips, her eyes still focused on the couch. “I’ll drive back home and grab his toolbox”
She turned away without another word, leaving Alice to call out to her retreating back.
“Can you get me a latte on the way back?”
Bette responded silently with a middle finger in the air as she continued to walk away.
Alice looked genuinely confused as to why she would have received such a response, the look on her friend’s faces further adding to her cluelessness.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!