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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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“What?” She swung out her arms so forcefully that the icee container slipped from her hands and landed face down with a thud, a sprinkle of blue spraying out around it.
Dana’s eyes went to the mess on the floor and snorted in satisfaction, grinning as she plopped back onto the couch. “Instant karma. That’s what you get for giving Bette a hard time about her girlfriend”
“I was not!” Alice pointed her wooden spoon in her best friend’s direction, “Speaking of girlfriends .. where’s yours?”
Dana’s jaw dropped, surprised at the way Alice had turned the tables on her. Her eyes twinkled in amusement, knowing that her best friend was only teasing. Nevertheless, she sat up in her seat fully prepared to defend Lara. “She’s working”
“Oh how convenient” Alice mocked right before the two erupted into a heavy argument that ranged from laziness to lack of support.
There was so much tension between the two that no one save for Alice and Dana themselves could understand how they hadn’t gotten together at some point or another. Alice liked to tell anyone who’d listen that she was long over her crush on Dana, that their “debates” were proof of that. Everyone knew better and though the rest of the group suspected that Dana would have felt differently toward Alice had Lara not been in the picture, no one would ever intervene. Not only did they feel like it wasn’t their place but Lara was part of their group and they each loved her as such.
Shane turned her head to look at Carmen, jutting her chin out in an attempt to silently gain the Latina’s attention amidst their quarreling friends. Carmen met her gaze and leaned across the back of the couch to get closer to the brunette.
She misjudged the distance between herself and Shane however, her movement putting them no more than a mere whisper away from one another. Their eyes locked in a heated gaze for a moment before Carmen’s eyes flickered to Shane’s lips. When she realized what she had done, she turned her head away.
It was really an attempt to collect herself, to save her pride from the embarrassment she currently felt but the action inadvertently set her up for a temptation like no other.
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!