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Tina: Well, you are good at it. Your body just glides through the water and you form is perfect.
Bette: Thank you. You have a rather nice swimmer’s body as well. You have good form too. Are you ready to get out of here?
Tina: Yes, I think I am about ready for some lunch.
Bette: Well, let’s go get showered and dressed.
We then got out of the pool. Bette handed me my towel and dried off and put on my robe and shower shoes. Bette’s body was more on display in her suit than perhaps than if she had been nude. She was an athlete and didn’t appear to have an ounce of fat anywhere. Taunt sleek limbs, her abs were well defined, her breast were the perfect size for her body and had that cute butt that seem to invite me to just squeeze those cheeks. I have never seen a more beautiful human in my life. She took her shower cap off and shook her hair out and then put on her robe. With all that glorious hair, she was simply gorgeous and my woman crush seemed to be growing.
I went to my cubical and started the water in the shower. I took off my robe and got into the shower to remove my wet suit. The warm water of the shower was a lovely experience. I used some of the available soaps and took a little longer than usual shower. I then dressed and came out and dried my hair and put all my towels and robe into the laundry hamper. Bette was smiling at the other end of the vanity drying her hair.
Bette: You look like you could use a nap.
Tina: I think I could. I think I need to get myself on a better exercise routine as well. I didn’t push myself near as much as you did and I’m just worn out.
Bette: You have to swim regularly to put as much as I did today and not just be worn out. You did fine. Most of my swim buddies give out in about 30 minutes. You lasted more than an hour. That’s pretty good. We will get back to the main cabin, get you a little lunch and maybe a nap and you will be good as new. Perhaps better than new.
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Jeez!?,
I’ve only read the first paragraph and am welling up….how do you do that?
I can’t think of a time when they are not together.
I’ll continue reading now, tough beginning though
I’ll comment on the flip side
Thankyou for all your incredible stories Martha…your a f@@king Rockstar
Well, what a story, I really enjoyed it.
I love how they meet, their time at Camp David and the natural progression they took together.
Try really are perfect for each other and your story certainly reflects that.
I still can’t bear to think of them not being together!
Thank you so much, a beautiful story.
I look forward to the next one.
Janice24,
First of all this story is an alternative time and life for our Bette and Tina. The story is being told by a woman who is older (85 years old) and has experienced a full and joyful life with the woman she loved. They have had more than 40 years together even though they didn’t meet until they were middled aged. I like that they took the time to get to know one another for a few days before charging into a romantic relationship. I like that Bette insist that Tina think about her own life and if she is prepared for the changes which will occur as they start to see each other romantically. Bette wants Tina to make her decision about her life knowing the possible downside. For me, that shows immediately how much Bette respects and cares for Tina right out of starting gates. I also like that Bette insist they talk about things fully as they go. She seeks out Tina’s boundaries and comfort level before they do anything. This is why their relationship is so strong…. they hide nothing from each other.
From the idea to publication, I took 4 days… I enjoyed writing this story because I could see that both Bette and Tina would go from a mundane life to a life of love and devotion within a matter of weeks. And it would result in a lifetime of happiness. Isn’t that what we all want in our lives?
Thank for reading and for commenting on this story… until I saw your comments, I didn’t think anyone had read it…. Thank you for your support and encouragement…
OMG! How did I let this gem get past me. I loved every word. I would love to read something else from you, thank you so much for your talent.
OneStorm1 – Thank you for reading… I published this a little more than a year ago and I posted it this year on Achieve of Our Own. I do have three long book stories which is a single series and one other one shot which is about the same length as this one. I then not to writer about angst and problems between Bette and Tina. I think there are plenty of authors who present those kind of stories. All my published stories are on this website. Go to the story search page, put my name in under author (Martha3128) and they are all listed.
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