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    The Most Distant Course

    “Does Commander Kornbluth also believe I was the one who’s controlling this case?” 

    “Are you not?”

    Tina takes a deep breath, her throat is in pain by the choking, but she holds it back.

    “Allow me to ask you a question, Commander. I am just a sick woman who worked as a secretary in a TV company. How could I possibly know that Shane McCutcheon was being transferred to another city, and arranged a great bunch of rebels for a prison break?”

    “Because you are Justine Cooper.”

    “Commander…” Tina sighs. “Even if I were a brilliant criminal who could order an entire organization, Senator Buckley’s power is still way stronger than the woman Justine Cooper, she has the trust from the society, sources from the media, and people everywhere…Tell me, how possibly could a woman who is a criminal, be more powerful than her?”

    “She’s just a politician.”

    “And look at how she manipulated you, sir,” Tina smirks. “Moreover, I’ve heard that the great brain of the criminal group was dead, Detective Porter confirmed herself with her own life standing in the middle of the organization, how could she be wrong? And if Justine Cooper was truly alive, how could she possibly knew that the prisoner was being taken to another place?”

    Aaron’s face falls. “weren’t you the one who sent the message to me?”

    Tina tilts her head, her face is so innocent, even Aaron can’t look through her.

    “What message?” 

    The Commander slightly frowns, not happy that this woman didn’t fall for the trap. He clears his throat.

    “The message Justine Cooper left me, a note, asked about if I still remembered her.”

    “Do you know this Justine Cooper?”


    “Well, then, this Justin Cooper must be very arrogant, and smart. Commander, among all the people in the FBI, among all the people who’ve investigated the Coopers case, why, a woman who you’ve never met before, would ask for you?”

    Aaron Kornbluth says nothing.

    “I have no reason to be against you, Commander. As you can see, I just engaged with my girlfriend and I have a son, I am really happy with my life. There is no benefit for me to stay on the opposite side of you, all I want to do is cooperate with the FBI and leave this place and head home as soon as possible, my body cannot tolerate the cold weather of Washington. If there’s anything I knew about the case I would tell you already, why bother procrastinating till now?”


    1. Hi CJ:

      Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.

      Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.

      Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.

      Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.

      CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.

      Thanks CJ the story is amazing.


    2. Hi CJ,

      Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!

      Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.

      Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.

      I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.

      But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die 🙏 After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.

      Again, a fantastic story!!!

    3. Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.

      Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.

      Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.

      You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?

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