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    The Most Distant Course

    “What are you implying?”

    “Nothing, Commander, nothing…” Tina says. “You are a great FBI commander, surely you will observe that among all the people around us, there is only one person who is smart enough and powerful enough to set up these whole messes, pulling you, Detective Porter, me…everyone into this great show.”

    “A show?” Aaron frowns.

    “The FBI has wasted so much time to capture a criminal of Cooper organization, but turned out, the things went the exact same way as the beginning, Shane Mccutcheon was being taken away, FBI got no credit from it, the only thing that changed was that Detective Porter and I were accused. And you, my dear Commander, should take the blame for the missing criminal, except for one person…who planned the whole arrest mission and set up all things and won’t  need to take any responsibility.”

    Tina raises her eyebrows when she sees Aaron gulps nervously, the blonde nods with acceptance.

    “Exactly.”

    “Before you accuse of …this situation…to the Senator, explain to me, what you’ve confessed to Faye Buckley?”

    Using her name? Seems he’s starting to be convinced.

    Tina chuckles. “Do you actually believe what I’ve said?”

    Aaron replies nothing.

    “I may have a great talking skill, Commander, moving my mouth and say some bullshit is nothing difficult…All I do was to use my imagination, how could I possibly command the entire rebel to save Shane McCutcheon? You are a commander yourself, sir, do you think such a weak woman like me can control an entire army?”

    “How did you know what happened to the Senator?”

    “She wouldn’t have to ask me here if she knew what has happened, furthermore, it’s not hard to find out the Senator’s unnaturally pace when she’s walking, so I guessed that she must be hit or wounded when she’s trying to find Shane.”

    “Was that so?”

    Tina raises her eyebrows. “Really? Even till now, Senator Buckley still says nothing to you?”

    It’s not hard to see that the Commander is trying to hold back his anger.

    “I’ve had a question from the very beginning when I walked in this building,” Tina looks around. “If Justine Cooper wanted to take revenge of you, by her ability to manipulate her criminal organization, you shouldn’t be standing here. Moreover, if I were her, and after I came here, by the close distant I had plenty of times to kill you and the Senator, but you are still alive. How do you explain that?”

    Comments

    1. Hi CJ:

      Wow, what a chapter, good game played by Tina.

      Thanks God,James and Bete arrived on time.

      Now, we need Tina saved and healthy, and Buckley in jail forever.

      Candace should be punished for attent to murder Tina, and go to make the company to her mom.

      CJ, please, save Tina, don’t let her died.pleaseeee.

      Thanks CJ the story is amazing.

      P

    2. Hi CJ,

      Oh god, what a incredible good chapter!!!

      Tina played the game so well!!! Bye bye Senator Buckley, i hope she rots in hell in jail, along with her daughter and the Commandor Aaron! They all deserve a long time life jail sentence and not death penalty. That would be to kind for them.

      Tina gets finally what she wanted since her family, mother and aunt, were killed brutally by orders from that evil bitch Faye Buckley.

      I feel a little sorry for Candace, never being enough to be loved or cared by the people she had in her life, but doing everything that her mother told her, shame on her, how could she do that after she fought and worked so hard to become a captain. I know, she was so in need of the love or appreciaton from her mother that she was brainwashed. Very sad.

      But the ending has me nervous, you can’t let Tina die ???? After all she and Bette went through they deseve to be a happy family with Noah.

      Again, a fantastic story!!!

    3. Good Chapter….so many questions answered. I was hoping that one of the bad guys would have remorse for their previous sins and treat Tina and Bette with some kind of respect and dignity. I was in hopes that Candace would be that person. Until Candace attacks Tina, she could walk away from all these misdeeds unscathed. She may could have kept her position with the LA police department. But once she attacked Tina, her fate was sealed. She is as bad as her mother and Aaron. She needs to obtain justice as well.

      Tina’s condition is really serious – sounds like punctured lungs, gun shot wound, massive loss of blood, heart failure plus her chronic fight from drug addition. Healing will not come quickly. Of course, injuries this serious will involve some introduction to new pain killers during the process of healing. Tina just needs a break and some seriously good health care. And with Bette by her side, her attitude will be good and will enhance her healing. We all hope for the best for Tina and for Bette.

      Oh, Surely Max Sweeney is lying about killing Shane – right? Shane is somewhere getting the proper medical care and being nursed back to health and perhaps with a new identity? Max needs to be saved as well. Maybe he can go to Canada with a new identity also.

      You have me hooked on this saga….love it….look forward to the next one?

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