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The Most Distant Course
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“Oh yeah? Wait until his mama T forbid him to eat more ice cream after dinner, then suddenly you will become his favorite mother.” I snorted.
“Mama!” Noah banged the door.
“Come in,” I shouted at the door.
A silence.
“Are you and mama B naked?”
My wife and I looked astonishingly at each other. I knew we were both thinking about the same thing…Where did that come from?
“If you were naked, I’ll come later, it’s gross.”
I giggled, turned my head to my wife. “That was your fault.”
“Hey, you held a half of responsibility!” Bette protested. “If your breasts didn’t look that delicious, I wouldn’t taste them in the early morning.”
“Come in, honey, don’t worry, we have our clothes on.” I rolled my eyes and said.
My boy carefully opened the door a tiny bit just to make sure his mama was telling the truth, after seeing the scene was normal. He ran to me and offered me a hug.
“Morning, mama.”
“Morning, sweetie.”
Bette obviously, was not happy about that.
“Hey, where’s mine?”
Noah pouted, he let go of me, put his hands on his waist as if he was a big man.
By the sunlight, I took a close look at my boy. His curly dark hair was still a mess, under the dark skin, his muscles grew much stronger, not the skinny little boy anymore. He’s only ten but his much taller than other elder students in the school, dark brown eyes were so bright and shiny, now they were staring directly at his other mother.
How adorable.
He may not have any blood connection with both of us, but his attitude and beauty were so much like Bette, my beautiful wife.
“You don’t get a hug before you explain what happened to the kitchen stove,” Noah said, as well as confronting a naughty kid for the trouble he’s done.
I looked back at my wife, had to try very hard not to burst out laugh, this was so funny.
“What happened to the stove?” I asked purposely.
Bette shot me a deadly glare, normally the gang, especially Alice would back off after seeing her angry look, but nope, I’m her wife, I’m not afraid of her scary look. I knew Bette, she might look angry outside but in her heart, she’s scared the shit out.
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Hi CJ,
What a incredible good chapter!
At first i thought you skipped the part about Tina’s life in danger and moved fast forward to their future. And oh what a beautiful dream Tina had when she was fighting for her life. That is certainly a part i want to read more about! The interaction and pouting between Bette & Tina and Noah warmed my heart and made me laugh!
It was a well calculated risk Tina took, but at the end she is the absolute winner!!!
I hope to read what happened with Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornblunth and of course what happened with Candace.
I am a little sad that there will be only three chapters more on this incredible story!
Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent as writer and this story!
Hi CJ:
Great chapter, that was very sweet, like Bibi, I thought that you skipped a whole chapter but then I realized about the wonderful dream of Tina.
Yes, it was hard but Tima made it, now we want to learn what happened with the evil people what about Buckley, Aaron, Candace.
I would like to see how the legal situation of Tina will be fixed.
And of course the happy ending.
Wonderful story, my friend.
Thanks and pps.
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Love it…after three weeks some of Tina’s superficial wounds and bruises should have healed. The deep wounds and the broken bones probably will take a lot longer. And considering her fragile health, its a wonder she survived at all. Bette needs to heal also. Can’t wait to hear about Faye Buckley, Aaron Kornbluth, and Candace Newell. Oh and what really happened to Shane? Did Max really kill her? Surely not! Is Tina now really in the clear – free to live her life as a normal person? What will happen to Bette and her job? Maybe she will leave law enforcement and do something else? I really hope the Cooper Family chapter is now truly closed.
This is a good story….I want Tina and Bette to make a home and life together. Thankyou for the update.
Great Chapter!
You had me a bit at sea to start with but glad I persevered!
Mixed feelings about the story ending but really looking forward to your next post.
You are a talented storyteller, thanks for posting.
SG