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The Promise
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Shane: Its all for you…
Alice jumped and turned around startled to see the room was filled with lit candles. They werent anywhere in sight when she first came out, but somehow Shane had lit them all while her back was turned. The surface tops of all of her furniture was covered in blue and white candles.
Suddenly, the scent of lilac and chamomile overtook her. It was her favorite scent that came from the prayer candles her father used to light in the basement when he would meditate….while tripping on acid. How Shane knew this, or the coincidence that occurred, either way was overwhelming.
Shane: …For my favorite girl.
Shane held out a bold colored Bird of Paradise flower. Alice smiled internally as she thought back to their only family vacation to Costa Rica. The wild flowers appeared to come to life when the wind blew across everything on the island. It wasnt a real family vacation, but her mothers show was filming a nostalgic episode that looked back over its previous seasons and they were on location in Costa Rica. Her presences wasnt necessarily wanted, since it was summer, and the maids mother died, but she and her siblings spent the greatest week inside a hotel room that could be expected.
Alices attention snapped back to focus as Shane seemed to float casually towards her.
Alice: Its not my fav…..
Shane: Shhhh….tonight it is.
Alice nodded and looked down to see small tea light candles were lit on the floor around the bed and outlining the furniture. The steam that continued to drift from the bathroom seemed to be in endless supply.
Alice: Shane I dont want this…I dont want you anymore….you have to leave.
Shane ran her hand down the side of Alices face and kept her eyes locked with hers. Shanes eyes were shining silver and were highlighted with small flecks of gold like Julie Sorrensons…..Alices highschool crush that always kept her speechless. She spent an entire semester as her partner in sophomore bio before she could ask her to pass a test tube.
Shane pressed her forehead to Alices and she felt herself shutter involuntarily. Alice tried to step back, but her legs were like cement. They were heavy and glued to the floor. The steam from the shower, held her in its grasp as she clung desperately to her wet towel that was draped around her body.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.