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The Promise
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Shane: I know Im not good enough….I never will be, but Ive come up with something that I hope will satisfy you.
Before Alice could answer, she found herself laying on her back on the bed, slightly propped up on the pillows. Shane crawled up the bed kissing her legs and inner thighs on the way up. She stopped when she reached the bottom hemline of Alices towel. She looked up at her with a slight twinkle in her eyes and moved up her body until they were face to face.
Alice: So what did you have in mind?
Shane: Well…I thought maybe instead of showing each other our best moves….we could groom someone else.
Alice was completely lost and once again Shanes actions beat her to the question her mind had formed. Shane rolled off of her and propped herself up on her side as she let out a smooth yell.
Shane: Baby girl…get in here.
Shane sounded more like she was one of the men in Big Daddys mindless entourage, then her usual laid-back self. Alice caught Shanes eye as she looked over her shoulder at the door. Alice turned around to see there in the doorway, the young girl who had been stuck at Shanes hip for the past few days.
Alice: Youve got to be ***** kidding me!
Dash stood in baggy jeans with boxers sticking out over the top. Her wife beater was cut to show off her tight midriff and she wore sunglasses and a bandana over her straight black and green hair. She looked like she stepped out of a Tupac video and should have Thug Life scrawled across her stomach. Alice couldnt help but notice she looked a lot like a lighter version of Alliyah as the song Age Aint Nothin but a Number came drifting into the room to set the mood.
Alice: Uhhh uh. Oh Helllllz NO!
Alice moved to jump off the bed but found herself pinned down as Shane straddled her quickly.
Shane: This is for both of you….Ill teach her everything I know…and then youll get someone who satisfy you and who can feel…
Alice: Feel what?
Shane: Anything…….something…..everything.
Alice felt the mattress shift and turned to her side to see Dash kneeling on the bed beside them. In her hand she held a large bottle of champagne. Shane turned to Alice with a cocky expression on her face.
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OMG that was brill i think it is me that needs the shower now a cold one at that.
By that way glad u r back wrighting cuz i love ur work :)
Yay you’re back!
That was weirder than her Ton Ton dream on the show!
Yay, you’re back and you came back with a bang girl!!!! Now that may have been a dream and they may have been playing with jail bait it was bloody HOT and now I gotta go and jump in yet another cold shower!! lol Thank you so much and hope all the ‘writers shit’ clears up soon!! =0)
WOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER . What a surprise.I don’t know what alice was on but I want some!!!Thanks.
NICE TO HAVE YOU BACK THAT WAS GREAT
That was a great update you almost fool’s me ~wink~ I glad you’re back, I hope my next fix will not take that long.
no, no, no your story kicks ass!
As for the Alice, Dash and Shane hook up i thought i was having an acid flashback for a minute there.
Jesus with Dreads and a Bong I might go back to church!
Glad your back!! To answer you question, all of the above! More please.
HOLY CRAP WOMAN..what an awesome post..glad that you are back..I have missed you and your story….THIS was such a HOT yet wierd…but a good wierd…lol…man that alice needs to get her shit together and go get her woman…or that SHANE needs to hurry up and get ALICE…man just get those two gals together..so we can have yet another HOT HOT…encounter…LOL post again soon..and don’t make me wait so long… :)
Well thanks for finally writing again, it was different but still pretty damn good writing on your part.
ah….I would never have guessed this?!?
I do have one guess on Dash – somehow related, but not sister. Kind of want to see where you lead Shane and Alice. And looking forward to more “missions”!
Thanks for this story!
God you scary me in this chapter, I thought what the hell what’s going on here and why Shane and Dash doing this to Alice and they all in bed together and 3 men there watching them in bed god but now it’s just dream. What a surprise and hot chapter, love it. Anyway post soon the next one. Thank you!
WOW! I had thought you had abandoned us! Welcome back. As always, you have you own unique style and story to tell. Your chapters are never dull that’s for sure. And don’t worry about offending anyone. A little challenge is good for the soul. Thank you.
Lmao that was briliant, glad to see you’re back, I missed your chapters. laughed so hard at the “What would Shane do” thing, awesome girl!
ps: and I really don’t know when I can write again…
OMFG…baby, that was brilliant! I was laughing my ass off by the end. Love the tap on the inner thigh. ~winks~
RealJLO I ment heart wrenching in a good way not a bad way. The way you write each chapter on a certain character you make the reader feel there pain as well as the laughter. I hope that made sense if not feel free to email me at Gizmo3378@aol.com and you can tear me a new ass if that made no sense at all. Please continue writing this amazing story.