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The Roommates – Pride & Prejudice: Chapter 9
The young man didn’t appear to more than twenty years old and his creamy, bronzed skin blushed as he smiled, his dark brown eyes twinkling up at her. “Miss, a picture would never do your beauty justice. Forgive me for staring, but I found that I could not look away. Please forgive.” He replied.
That threw her. The irritation that had driven her from her half-eaten teriyaki chicken began to fade as a smile replaced her brooding scowl. “Are you serious?” she asked.
The dark-haired stranger nodded, a few strands of straight black hair falling down into his eyes. “Very much so.”
Alice watched him then, finally noticing how handsome he was. His deep complexion and accent told her he was probably South American. She watched his long, slender fingers pull the hair from his eyes. He had chiseled features with eyes that seemed to glow and a small dimple in his left cheek.
Unable to walk away, Alice took a seat across from him. “You’re certainly a charmer.”
He blushed again and she could tell he was shy. That only boosted her confidence. She stuck out her chest a little more and batted her eyes at him. “What’s your name?”
The stranger licked a set of perfect lips and replied, “My name is Paulo. It’s a pleasure to meet you.”
Alice extended her hand and they shook. “Paulo, I’m Alice.”
When they separated, he leaned back against the small booth and said, “I hope you do not think I was being rude. You really are very beautiful.”
She leaned forward; her elbow bent on the table. “You’re so charming. How could I not smile at that? Where are you from Paulo? Your accent is heavenly”.
Paulo blushed once more, smiling his shy smile. “I am from Argentina. I am here attending the university.”
Alice dug into Paulo’s details until she learned he’d been studying at UCLA for nearly three years, was an only child of an Argentinean banker, played soccer three times a week, and was a double major in accounting and finance. Though Alice had thought her days of dating guys was over, there was something uniquely intriguing about the crinkle in Paulo’s eyes that made her want to know him better. He shyly asked her for a date and she happily agreed to meet him the following day for lunch at the Asian eatery.
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It’s been so long, but i’m very glad that you decided to continue this story. Thank you!
I’m post again later about this chapter, when i’ll read it.
Hi welcome back!
I need to read the other chapters first before i can comment.
I hope next week to catch up.
Hey, you’re back, it’s great!
Like others i think i need to refresh your to story and first to reread previous chapters and than comment this.
No! Whats wrong with Bette?? She was ok, and what happen now with her?
I hope you answer this question soon, so waiting for your next post
I have read all the chapters from start to finish. I know this was eleven years in the making. It was a very good story line however, your ending was rather abrupt and incomplete. Is Bette dying here? Or will she make a recovery and go on with her life with Tina? Although it appears to be serious it could be easily treated and just a bump in the weekend for Bette and Tina.
I appreciate your putting this chapter out. I very much would like to see the story continue to a more natural ending such as to wedding of Bette and Tina or to a break-up which they believe is where they want to be or where ever you believe the story will go. But to leave your reader at the entry of the hospital with Bette in a crisis mode and with Tina standing there seeing her lover in pain and agony? The end?
Your writing is very good. I hope you will do more and more often. Thank you for your efforts.
Martha, it’s the third part of Roommates. Like i understand it’s the end only of this part, but author wrote about that this story will continue in next part – “The Roommates – Fast Forward to 2019”
I have read all previous Chapters!
I can now proceed to 2019.
Wow!
SG