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WESTERN SKIES
Kit – She is! Art is her passion!
Tina – Interesting …
She walks around the room. She stops in front of a painting on the wall: two young girls entering a cave. Each girl is dressed in shorts, wears a hat and a jacket, carries a backpack and holds a stick. The shorter redhead walks in front. The taller brunette follows her. The painting is signed by Elizabeth Porter.
Kit – She was still a teenager when she painted it. She and Charlie exploring the region!
Tina – Nice! She did a very good job! (pause) Can I take a few pictures?
Kit – Go ahead!
She takes pictures of the room, including the corner and the view outside.
Tina – I can see why she chose this room. The view is amazing!
Kit – She has an eye for beauty, for sure! In more ways than one!
The blonde looks at the covered canvas.
Tina – Certainly a view worth painting …
Kit – She doesn’t allow us to see her paintings until they are done!
Tina nods disappointed.
Kit – But do you really think that I follow orders from my baby sis?
She pulls the cloth away.
Tina – No, it’s not neces …
Her eyes widen and her mouth drops when she sees the incomplete painting in front of her. It’s an abstract figurative painting of a naked woman from her belly up in shades of white, pink and maroon. The woman is lying in bed as seen from someone positioned between her legs: the upper line of her pubic hair appearing at the bottom of the painting, her torso extended, her long black hair in disarray spread over a pillow, her face in ecstasy and one arm in the air, with the palm of her hand touching her forehead.
Kit – Oh my …
Tina – Wow …
She gazes at the painting in awe.
Chapter 5
Bette’s bedroom, afternoon: The surprise makes her blush. She chuckles, unsettled by her own reaction.
Tina – Not what I imagined …
Kit – You don’t like it?
Tina – Oh no! It’s … amazing! Just …
She points to the painting of the girls in the cave.
Tina – … a big departure from that one!
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I promise to read every chapter as soon as possible, as long you keep posting them regurlarly ????
I love it, they are two proud woman as i see, but i already see the attraction.
Kit is a very nice woman and certainly not afraid to head butt with Bette.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
dbff:
Great chapter, thanks for the rapid update. I like your story very much.
P
Hi, thanks for the update!
I promise read and comment regularly too)
I like how you developing your story, so waiting for the next.
Sorry, but can’t help about editing old posts – maybe you need to write messege to Jacky (https://lesfan.com/members/jacky/)
I love the storyline and your writing style is great! I can’t wait for the next chapters!
Thank you for the creat chapter!
Bette in wet t-shirt – nice)
Waiting for the next chapters.
I promise you that if you keep posting regularly I will read them as soon as I am able.
Love the 3 Characters you have given us here and look forward to your story unfolding.
Thanks for posting please post again soon.
SG
Great descriptive writing. Im hooked! PPS
Great chapter!
Good to see that Tina and Bette start talking, but don’t know how i feel about T saw Bette’s picture without her permission
Interesting plot, waiting for the next update!
Dear dbff
I’m currently discovering this other story, being “orphan” from your After The Kiss *wink* and I’m already hooked !
You have a truly cinematic eye – and I’m a huge cinema passionate. I can see Kit’s ranch and every details as if I was admiring them through Tina’s eyes and, well, to imagine Bette as a cowgirl is very sexy, I must say !
Since I adore western movies, I cannot help but remembering the great Missy, my favorite classic actress : pretty fiery, even arrogant but mesmerizing too – our poor Tina has no chance to resist !
Thank you so very much for this new delightful journey, my dear writer :-)
A.
I’m so glad you found this story, A.! It’s for Tibetters like you!
ps: I had to check, but I believe you were referring to Barbara Stanwyck! :D
Yes indeed !
Well, what can I say ? “Cowgirl” immediately makes me think about Stanwyck in one of her westerns (like The Furies, The Moonlighter or Forty Guns) – even if this marvelously versatile actress was great in every other movie genres possible *wink*
And, well, her voice is the sexiest I have ever heared… Not a beauty but what a charm – more dangerous, the charm !
So now that you already know two of my absolute favorite ladies, Jennifer Beals and “Missy”, I five your the last two : my first teenage crush, Vivien Leigh, and my biggest screen crush ever, Kate Winslet :-)
And you, if I can ask ? *big wink*
A,