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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Bette: Uh, judging from the circles under your eyes I think your drink is just fine.
Alice: [in a more serious tone] Well it’s not.
Bette: You okay?
Alice: I will be when you pour more Vodka into my cup.
Bette: [holding the bottle in her hand] Okay, fine under one condition you tell me what’s going on with you?
Alice: I really don’t want to talk about it.
Bette: Is it Tasha?
Alice: I don’t want to talk about.
Bette: Did you sleep with Dana? Or spread it wide then laid it low with someone else?
Alice: Bette!
Bette: [pointing at her] A ha…….guilty! I knew it!
Alice: OMG Bette!
Bette: If you ask me you’ve been spending too much time gallivanting anyway Alice in Thot-land!
Alice: BETTE!
Bette: You know Chlamydia would be a really pretty name if it wasn’t a STD!
Alice: BETTE! I HAVEN’T DONE——–.
Bette: Your legs are like Taylor Swifts songs they’re never getting back together!
Alice: WHAT THE HELL?
Bette: [cutting her off now raising her voice] You know out of respect and the fact that none of this is my business I’ve kept my mouth shut but ever since Tasha left and Dana came into town you have lost your damn mind!
Alice: If you would give me a sec to———-!
Bette: Look if you don’t want to be with Tasha anymore at least have the ovaries to tell her the truth! I have nothing against you and Dana wanting to get back together if that’s what you guys want but, like my daddy used to always say don’t start a new chapter before closing the previous one.
Alice: [walking towards her grabbing her shoulders shaking her] LISTEN TO ME I HAVE NOT SPLEPT WITH DANA OR ANYONE!
Bette: [starting to calm down] Oh.
Alice: [taking a deep breath] Aside, from my recent behavior I still love her too much to hurt her like that.
Bette: Well, if you haven’t cheated then what’s going on?
Alice: [remains silent staring into the bottom of her cup before taking a sip]
Bette: Look, I know you said you don’t want to talk about it but judging from your appearance and attitude somethings been eating away at you. When is the last time you’ve slept?
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.