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What If – Chapter 10 (B)
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Alice: Every time I sneeze my eyes close.
Bette: [not impressed by her sarcasm] Okay, fine but don’t I say I never tried to———.
Alice: [interrupting her] Tasha accidentally pocket dialed me and I overheard some woman hitting on her. [finally confessing the cause of her funky mood.]
Bette: That’s it?
Alice: What do you mean that’s it? Did you not just hear me say I overheard another woman hitting on my girlfriend!?
Bette: [shrugging her shoulders] Yeah and?
Alice: So, if you overheard another woman hitting on Tina you mean to tell me you would be okay with it?
Bette: Oh hell no! [she says quickly]
Alice: [smiles] Yeah, that’s what I thought.
Bette: Look, you said the woman was coming onto to her and not the other way around in my opinion you have nothing to worry about.
Alice: Tasha wasn’t exactly shying away from her if you know what I mean.
Bette: How could you tell?
Alice: She kept laughing.
Bette: [wanting to make her feel better] Well, okay but I’m pretty sure she looks like a sea donkey so relax and don’t make a big deal about——.
Alice: [holds up her phone showing her a picture of Savannah]
Bette: [staring at it]
Alice: Any advice?
Bette: I’d book the next flight to Virginia!
Alice: Bette!
Bette: She’s beautiful! I mean she looks like a majestic cat! No, I take that back she reminds me of a chocolate sundae topped with caramel, whip cream, pineapples, nuts, and a cherry on top on a warm….hot….summers…..day. [she says in a lustful voice]
Alice: [snatching her phone away in disgust]
Bette: [a bit flustered] Sorry, I got a little carried away.
Alice: Ya think!
Bette: Okay…..okay, look Tasha has never given you a reason not to trust her just because some Halle, Beyonce, Rihanna, thicka-than-a-snicka look alike who wants to eat her like a Willy Wonka bar its nothing to worry——-.”
Alice: Bette! OMG, will you please stop you’re making me feel worse!
Bette: [taking a deep breath walks over pulling out the bar stool next to her] What are you going to do?
Alice: Can I be honest with you?
Bette: Yeah.
Alice: If Tasha were to cheat it’s hard to admit I’d deserve it.
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That really sucks when your hard drive crashed, i am very relieved you were able to get your stories back.
Jenny really is a nut case but sometimes so funny.
Dana and Alice, they are playing with fire, both their girlfriends have very beautiful women who are interested in them, but both are still insecure what to do or what they feel.
Bette is so funny in your story, i love her like that. Glad she told Tina to listen to her and make her feel and listen to her reasons.
I am looking forward to the next update!
As a computer engineer I should have known better!!!!! Needless to say, it will be a cold day in hell before I buy another Seagate external hard drive or any of their products lesson learned!!! I spent numerous hours recovering my data but glad it worked out in the end. (whew)! Be on the lookout for a more out spoken Bette as the story continues.
Hi Skunk:
Wow, very nice chapter, Alice has to decide what to do, and as she told Bette, she doesn’t know who she would choose, Tasha or Dana; and Dana is in a similar situation; ln the other hand Tasha is having a big temptation in Philadelphia, and if it wasn’t for Alice message ‘I love you’, she would keep going, accepting it without regret; about Lara, well, she has her options too.
Honestly, everybody should make a deep evaluation of their feelings and do not choose the easy and comfy way when is about emotions; but to listen to their hearts and use their brains and will to face the future, as Bette and Tina who already took a decision and are resolved to commit on it.
Okay, about Jenny, I already told you, why the girls have to stop Bette and Tina from killing Jenny, at least we would know ‘who killed Jenny’ and everybody would be happy. Someone has to leave a banana peel in the way of Jenny, close to the barbecue pit and see if she burns. I’ll wait eagerly for the update, pps.
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Like a Mario Kart banana peel? LOL!!!! Jenny is by far the hardest character for me to write for because she gets on my damn nerves!!!!! Seriously, when I write for her I have to down a few shots and two glasses of wine!!!!!!!!!
When I started writing this story initially it was because I always wondered if Dana never died would she and Alice down the line rekindle their romance even though Lara and Tasha were in the picture? Instead of Dana vs. Tasha it turned into me including my real life experience in the story. Can a person genuinely be in love with two people? One of the hardest lessons I had to learn is acknowledging the difference between “being in love” and “loving” someone which is what I am trying to convey in the story.