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Private Duty—Chapter 1

Tina stared at Bette for a moment then headed down the stairs into the kitchen where Tricia was getting cookies and milk for Alana.
”Tricia. What do you think of Bette?” Tina said crossing her arms and leaning against the counter.
”My first impression is that she is gentle and caring. Makes me feel better to leave her alone with Mom. You know I was apprehensive about bringing in a live in nurse to care for her.” Tricia answered
”I know that. So was I. But I feel better about this. There is something about her. I don’t know. It seems like I know her from somewhere but I can’t place it ” Tina said scrunching her forehead
Tricia looked at Tina and shook her head
”Tina. Don’t do that. You are getting premature wrinkles in your forehead from all the damn scrunching you do. But yeah there is something familiar about her”
”Well I can’t help it. I do that when I think” Tina scoffed
”Have you talked to Matt?” Tricia asked
Tina glared at her sister.
”No and I don’t want to. He has the nerve to come here while we were getting Mom moved in and breakup with me saying he was tired of me putting him off. Insensitive jerk” Tina huffed
”Tina? He regrets doing that. He misses you and you two were good together. Give him another chance. He stayed at our house talking to Greg a long time last night” Tricia said softly
Tina sighed
”When I came back from showing a house there were flowers on my desk with a card asking me to give him another chance. I don’t know Tricia. With Mom and everything I don’t have time to have a relationship right now. Maybe it was best that we broke up”
”Tina you were dating him for almost a year before he got stupid and decided to leave you. He realizes his mistake. Please talk to him. He’s like a lost puppy that has found his way to our house. So come claim him and take him back” Tricia smiled
Tina chuckled and grabbed a cookie of the plate Tricia was carrying as she walked out
”I’ll think about it” Tina answered not really knowing what to do.
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I remember this so pleased to see it back and look forward to you continuing it and completing it.
Happy New Year, stay safe
SG
Happy New Year to you SG! You stay safe!
This is a good beginning…. but please do not abandon your other story….. I so want to see what happens to Bette and Tina in that one as well as this one…..
I am going to have to start taking notes on all the stories that are in progress… I love reading them all, but I get somewhat frustrated when they suddenly end with no ending…. I get particularly frustrated when the story goes on for many months and chapters and then suddenly just stops – then years go by and nothing. And then suddenly the author will start to write again and starts one or two or three stories with no mention of the saga which I have been waiting for for months perhaps years. And the strange thing is that the stories are good and seem to be so close to completion. Another couple of chapters maybe????
Totally understand your frustration Martha!…If you are referring to Stolen Hearts it only has one chapter remaining for that book. I should post it soon. I have not decided to do a sequel. It would depend on demand. As far as Soul Dancing that one is far from over. This one however I have been writing on and it’s almost finished. It could warrant a sequel..but again.. that would be up to you the readers
Thank you for the comment!
I completely echo your comments.
A Happy and Healthy New Year Martha
Gr8 story. Sometimes forgiving ones’ self is a monumental task. Breaking patterns of self-hatred take more than a little bit internal tenacity. Tina will ultimately have to let Bette help her through the guilt and pain. And even Theresa will have to let Bette show her kindness.
Looking forward to more chapters!
Great story.. I hope to read more, please.
I remember this story and i am glad you have almost written all the chapters and yes i would love to read a sequel!
And of course I will read the other stories!
Happy New Year!
This is a really good chapter. Great beginning to a very intriguing story. Bette is very forgiving.