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The Most Distant Course
Then there are the other taps.
“SHUT…UP…AND…KISS…ME…Well, I thought you never ask.”
The detective bursts out a small laugh, very carefully, she presses her lips on Tina’s, it’s a soft kiss, not using the tongue or heated. Though it is simply a peck on the lips, the love they have shared with each other cannot be hidden, the smile on Bette’s face cannot be brighter.
“Do you want me to open up the curtain?” The detective asks.
Tina only nods, she’s still trying to find her voice.
Outside the window, the sun is setting,
However, this cannot hide the sad tears falling off the Detective’s cheek.
When Tina was finally awake, the stresses, the worried, and everything she’s been held by her own suddenly all relieved.
Her tears carry happiness, sadness, pain, and regret…So many emotions pour out as soon as seeing Tina waking up, there was once she thought she could never see those astonishing hazel orbs, she thought she could never hear Tina’s soft voice again.
Bette drops her head, her hand which is grabbing Tina’s becomes a little tighter, unwilling to let her fiance see she’s crying, she’s so afraid to lose Tina.
“Suhh…” This is all Tina can say, her voice sounds so funny.
Bette takes a deep breath, trying to calm her emotion down.
“Thank god…Thank god you are back, T…” The Detective sneezes her nose. “Don’t ever say I am hard to get along with, because you are the one who is a freaking pain in the ass.”
The blonde gives her lover a questioning look, her uninjured hand weakly pats on the brunette’s ones.
“You are the fucking craziest, stubbornest, and the most awful woman I’ve ever met, how could no one hate you?” Bette says through the tears, her words are harsh and mean, but she’s smiling, so far, they’re the happy tears. “You scared the shit out of me, T…When I saw Candace stood in the room, with a gun pointing at you, I swear, my heart stopped, how I wished…the person lying on the ground was me, how I wished I could be there and replaced you…And when she pulled the trigger…”
The Detective takes a long deep sigh. “I felt death.”
Guilt is written on Tina’s face, she knew her lover would be so devastated when Kit told her she gave out herself to the FBI. The blonde knew it wouldn’t be a nice trip, it was very possible that she wouldn’t be able to come back…But she had no choice, either Bette was caught, or she.
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Bibi28 says
Hi CJ,
What a incredible good chapter!
At first i thought you skipped the part about Tina’s life in danger and moved fast forward to their future. And oh what a beautiful dream Tina had when she was fighting for her life. That is certainly a part i want to read more about! The interaction and pouting between Bette & Tina and Noah warmed my heart and made me laugh!
It was a well calculated risk Tina took, but at the end she is the absolute winner!!!
I hope to read what happened with Faye Buckley and Aaron Kornblunth and of course what happened with Candace.
I am a little sad that there will be only three chapters more on this incredible story!
Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent as writer and this story!
proteonomics says
Hi CJ:
Great chapter, that was very sweet, like Bibi, I thought that you skipped a whole chapter but then I realized about the wonderful dream of Tina.
Yes, it was hard but Tima made it, now we want to learn what happened with the evil people what about Buckley, Aaron, Candace.
I would like to see how the legal situation of Tina will be fixed.
And of course the happy ending.
Wonderful story, my friend.
Thanks and pps.
P
Martha3128 says
Love it…after three weeks some of Tina’s superficial wounds and bruises should have healed. The deep wounds and the broken bones probably will take a lot longer. And considering her fragile health, its a wonder she survived at all. Bette needs to heal also. Can’t wait to hear about Faye Buckley, Aaron Kornbluth, and Candace Newell. Oh and what really happened to Shane? Did Max really kill her? Surely not! Is Tina now really in the clear – free to live her life as a normal person? What will happen to Bette and her job? Maybe she will leave law enforcement and do something else? I really hope the Cooper Family chapter is now truly closed.
This is a good story….I want Tina and Bette to make a home and life together. Thankyou for the update.
SassyGran says
Great Chapter!
You had me a bit at sea to start with but glad I persevered!
Mixed feelings about the story ending but really looking forward to your next post.
You are a talented storyteller, thanks for posting.
SG